chrryblssmninja: (loquaciousicons_baa)
chrryblssmninja ([personal profile] chrryblssmninja) wrote2009-08-09 01:06 am
Entry tags:

la lalala la

orig fic orig fic what?



First two, then four, then more. The pregnant women started appearing in the stairwells and alleys of Organ Row, waiting for the treatment. I didn't pay much attention until the murders began.

It was either the mothers - or a mother's "placenta pimp" - killing off the competition. Any not-rich woman that wanted to have a child would have to flee to the countryside, far from any facility that did the treatment. Who knew if you were going to beat her price?

They were suspicious women. Most of them pale beings fearing the slightest touch of sun. I don't think it mattered if the mother was pale, but I bet customers would argue differently.

There were the medical repair uses, of course, but the rich people who paid for those things preferred keeping within bloodlines. No, the biggest payer was the cosmetics industry. It had started in Asia. I don't know if animal placenta was used at first. But I've often heard that it's a big thing in Asia to have white skin. Wasn't long before women and some men sought out products with placenta, believing that it would make their skin as untanned and smooth as that of the babies that provided it.

Before long, I was guarding my mother, day and night. Hid a shotgun under the counter, slid weapons into the shelves. We barred the windows on the inside, and I'd put off virtual school until the nights. I had to wait after closing the store for Father to come home from work. I'd be on the ready while he opened the lock, making sure no one could attack him from behind. Then we'd go to the back, lock a second door, set a barrier, and walk upstairs to our home.

Then came that month's Teacher Day. No way I could avoid this and stay home. We called my cousin to take over guard duties. I was a little worried during class, but I thought I could at least trust my cousin to do her best.

I should have wondered about one thing, though, while this month's teacher lectured us on "Math and its Mysteries."
Why was my cousin was wearing more expensive clothes than usual?



In our language, the baby's name would have meant, "Golden Boy."




idea based on this thread with [livejournal.com profile] tresca


also help from this article.


I think I might expand this into a longer story. Maybe title it, "Youth."

[identity profile] tresca.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 08:37 am (UTC)(link)
So. Can I fangirl YOU now?? This is great! I can totally see this creepy world the narrator lives in.

[identity profile] chrryblssmninja.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 08:43 am (UTC)(link)
aww thanks. I couldn't have done it without your help.



now the idea's sprouting crazy in my mind and there are cyborg maids what

[identity profile] tresca.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
Cyborg maids sound AWESOME. Because - YES. These people dont have time for cleaning. They just want to be loved pretty!

[identity profile] chrryblssmninja.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 08:50 am (UTC)(link)
actually, it's more "people sell themselves into service and become cyborgs" - for jobs that need human thinking but desire maximum efficiency at any and all hours. Like maids for rich people.

[identity profile] tresca.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 08:55 am (UTC)(link)
And see - this is why I am glad you are making this universe. Because that makes so much more sense!
(deleted comment)

[identity profile] chrryblssmninja.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks!

[identity profile] claennis.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you and original fic would rock the universe because you have all these crazy grotesque things to base off on and spin-off in any particular way you want.

My original fic tends to be trashy plots with dysfunctional people throwing half-assed shit at each other. And not to mention, they tend to stay in the beta mode for months (and my beta person is distracted by her no-good-bf...)

[identity profile] chrryblssmninja.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
aww thanks


I can try and beta if you need

[identity profile] claennis.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:06 pm (UTC)(link)
would you? I think that what I finished this past June is in an awful state at the moment but if you want to, you can sludge through it?

also, the reason why she's taking so long is that she doesn't have mword to keep the formatting the same...

[identity profile] chrryblssmninja.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
sure, I'll try and make time


it might take up to two weeks at most

[identity profile] claennis.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
mmm, school's going to start soon too; I'll send it over, take your time but you know, real life is more important. :0

Part 1
Part 2

THANK YOU. SO MUCH.